Saturday, October 23, 2010

Blue Ghosts Go Green

Aloha poets, 
     Blue "ghosts" appear to rise against green tropical design in Hawaii
halloween season; inspires today's poetry. Enjoy!


Story the Jewel


Shadow fears itself into its own miracle
Story tears you off shelf down to spiritual
To live in your own fire is sizzle of love
Clear and free swings to rise above


Ruminations eclectic's no erudite poem
Write what you like, won't leave you alone
Share a reader's consciousness digressive
Campaign childfree the artful suggestive


Hands of the breeze guide so gentle
Smoking gardens steam so mental
Event's consequence, moments unfold
Story is detail, so I'm told


Speed and spectacle, vivid is now
Emotionally involved, writer's cash cow
To summarize story is talking to the wind
Events in reality, want you to join in


Pulse of narrative is where action begins
To want something beyond a tonic and gin
Condensed scene is where action is eating
Readers yearns for front row seating


Reader loves memory, where images live
A slice of love, crystal walls writers give
Some call it entertainment in diversity vest
You only know you gave story your best



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patrick d.adams
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