Saturday, May 14, 2011

Cloud Creature

Aloha poets,
     Can you see a creature in these tropical clouds?
Inspires today's poetry. Enjoy!

Hot Dogging Never Relishes the Moment

Present yourself engaging, available to go interactive
Timidity succumbs where old reluctant facts live 
Predictive art's your work still in progress
External world invites more largess

Passage of data in evolution's force
Safety sequesters to ride on its own horse
The science of decision-making remains at bay
Whilst the presentation of interest makes its own hay

Hot dogs, cokes once upon a time were the norm
Now the weather feels more than a bit warm
Are internal worlds the new place to go?
Defensive engagers--only for show?

patrick d. adams
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  1. What a lovely picture. I like how the yellow lights up the clouds and contrasts with the blue sky.